Not bad :D I find it very interesting. The music at the beginning is very catchy!
I have noticed, like with other Filipino-> English games, the grammar is a bit off, and it can make the game difficult to understand, or interrupt the flow when a player is reading. So I'd like to make the offer of going over the script to correct the small errors, if you like. :) I've done it for some other games, because I hate to see a game be shot down for something so small. So, I would be happy to help, if you accept.
Either way, I look forward to the full release. :)